Monday 5 January 2015

A New Beginning


Today we showed the draft of our short film to a focus group.
The overall consensus was positive, however most were confused by the narrative as well as the fact that the loot consisted of sweets. The ending was also pointed out to be quite bland without much of a twist.
One person mentioned that the theme of the film does not match the one we had aspired, not being dark and serious enough.

As a consequence of this feedback we decided on the following:
- We will refilm the movie, using fake diamonds rather than sweets.
- We will add a scene at the beginning, explaining how the robberes acquired the loot.
- There will be a different ending with a more intriguing twist.
- The theme of the film will be darker and grittier.

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